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yyssuu 发表于 2006-8-17 20:35

英语改错

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          Never Finished-Homework

    I am a student,so I have a lot of homework.

    Homework,I can not stop doing you but I hate you.I even want to throw you into the WC.But I can not.Ido not konw what to say.

    On monday,I tell myself to treat you as a friend.But you are too big for me.I become unhappy.As the days past,Ifeel like I am not a student,only a machine,only can do homework.

    Homework,I just want a chance to konw you,to konw when I can finish you.

    看看谁改的多,谁的好,谢谢.

thomas_qian 发表于 2006-8-18 23:32

一人说一个吧,SO不能句首,第1句im a student后面句号

duckhyh 发表于 2006-11-15 17:47

回复 #2 thomas_qian 的帖子

homework 不可数不能用a lot of 来形容.On Monday,I tell.....应该用told.I feel like中feel 后不能直接跟like的吧

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